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Landing-Page Conversion Audit

Tear down a landing page for clarity, persuasion and conversion.

You walk away with

A prioritised set of conversion fixes with rewritten copy where it counts.

What the council debates
Audit our landing page for conversion. Be specific and disagree where you see it differently.

THE PAGE:
[paste the URL, the copy, or a screenshot of the page]
WHO IT IS FOR: [the visitor, where they came from, their intent]
THE ONE ACTION WE WANT: [the primary conversion goal]
CURRENT PERFORMANCE (if known): [traffic, conversion rate, where people drop]

Debate:
1. The hero — does it pass the five-second test: what is this, who is it for, why care.
2. Clarity vs cleverness in the headline and subhead.
3. The value proposition and proof — is the benefit obvious and believed.
4. Friction and trust — form length, objections unaddressed, missing social proof.
5. The call to action — clarity, prominence, and whether the page earns the click.
6. Visual hierarchy and whether the page guides the eye to the action.

FINAL SYNTHESIS:
- A prioritised list of changes (highest conversion impact first), each with the specific fix.
- A rewritten hero headline + subhead + CTA.
- The single highest-leverage change to test first.